and second of all, OH.MY.GOD! that was so damn sexy and a bit sad at the same time. Lois loves him so much and he still can't admit that's what he wants. I think the heartbeat thing is one of the most romantic parts of the Clois relationship, and you did it wonderfully here.
I'm intrigued about the bracelet, you've mentioned a lot and I can't help to think it may hold the key to this whole mistery.
Please, keep the good work, I can't wait to read the interlude, specially if it's told from Lois' POV, I think that'll make this story even richer
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Date: 2009-10-12 07:18 pm (UTC)and second of all, OH.MY.GOD! that was so damn sexy and a bit sad at the same time. Lois loves him so much and he still can't admit that's what he wants.
I think the heartbeat thing is one of the most romantic parts of the Clois relationship, and you did it wonderfully here.
I'm intrigued about the bracelet, you've mentioned a lot and I can't help to think it may hold the key to this whole mistery.
Please, keep the good work, I can't wait to read the interlude, specially if it's told from Lois' POV, I think that'll make this story even richer